Revised poem

Today I took yesterday's poem to my friends at the Mashpee Poetry Group, aka the Steeple Street Poets, and they made some suggestions I really like. It almost makes it a new poem.

This is a new poem.
It will explain everything.
We are one
it will say.
Impermanence
it will say.
Compassion
it will say.
a lake,
a waterfall,
an ocean
it will say.

James W. Kershner May 2013